ONE BAD TOILET

 ONE BAD TOILET

  

One Thursday night a boy named William was at his friends house. They were having fun ,yelling telling embarrassing, stories and eating food.

At one point William needed to go to the toilet. So he got up of the couch and walked over to the bathroom door. He went in thinking i hope the lock dosen"t get stuck like last time.

 A FEW WEEKS BEFORE

William had been at the same friends house and he had gone to the toilet. But once he went over to the door to unlock it it wouldn't budge a sense of dread fell over William he was going to die he was going to suffocate and die. William lay on the floor and started to cry this would be his death place a small smelly bathroom.

BACK TO WHERE WE WHERE BEFORE

William decided to lock the door because it would be pretty embarrassing if someone walked in on him pooping. William made an deposit in the porcelain bank and went to the top of the toilet to flush. But once again a wave of dread washed over William when the toilet wouldn't flush oh no William thought my deposit is still there and i cant let anyone see it. William tried over and over again but the toilet still wouldn't take his deposit so he grabbed the only thing he could find the scrubber. William thrust it down the toilet and pushed his deposit down and into the bank. Once William did that he ran over to the door and tried to turn the lock but again the same wave of dread went through him the lock wouldn't budge William went over to wall and then walked back over to the lock come on come on he said finally the lock opened and with sore fingers William washed his hands and went out.

THE END 

THANKS FOR READING

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