Noel
Noel
Written By Mudga
for the Christmas Story Competition
I used to hate Christmas. The painful memories it brought back stung, and I found Christmas day would
sweep by in a tangle of tears. Essentially,it was just another day. Another mission to complete, and
another day to survive.
I was named after the celebration, Noel, that's what my mother and father called me. After all, they loved
Christmas. So it was almost preternatural when they both passed away on Christmas day, their favorite
day of the year. I guess that's why I despise the Christmas season, the memories.
Not many people in Ethiopia celebrate Christmas. People do what they can, for some, Christmas means
large parties, for others, it may mean trying to get people to sleep with a full stomach. I try the latter.
But one Christmas, four years after my parents passed away, something anomalous happened.
I was darting through the overcrowded fish markets in Ethiopia, everything was normal, loud shop
owners averted their fish prices, men and women hustled about bargaining and arguing, it was all as it
should be.
Suddenly, a hand grasped my upper arm, I flung around to hit whoever it was, when my eyes set upon a
golden figure. I couldn't quite make out his features, he was glowing mass, unearthly and almost like a
cloud, but still almost human.
Oddly I didn't feel the urge to scream nor run. I just stood, gazing upon this blinding figure that by now
had let go of me. He then smiled at me, and ushered me through the crowds, common sense would tell
me not to follow a strange man. But this almost seemed different, like i had known this person my whole
life. So I followed him.
Through the streets we wound, I followed him out of the fish market, where he abruptly stopped. Then,
it happened so fast.
Colours blurred and the alleyway in which we had been standing in now transformed into a rolling field.
I looked about me in disbelief, Oak trees towered above me, birds chirping and fluttering about. Bees
hovered above vibrant flowers. It was my idea of heaven.
Remembering the man, I turned back to him, to see he was watching a happy couple playing with a
bubbly baby. I gasped, stumbling, tears welled in my eyes. It was them. Mum and Dad...and me.
Running, I launched myself into the tall grass beside them. They didn't notice me, it was like I wasn't
there.
I watched them play with me, laughing and enjoying the meadow in which was so full of joy.
After what seemed hours of watching my parents and me. I turned back to the man. He looked down on
me, and handed me a small box. Then, the colours began to swirl again, the meadow slowly faded back
into the dingy alleyway beside the fish market. And I was back. But the man wasn't. He had vanished,
maybe he was still in the gorgeous meadow with my parents, I shall never know.
My hands still clenched the box, I opened it up. Inside, was a necklace with a small cross dangling from
its chain, and a note with the words merry Christmas
After that Christmas. I swore I would celebrate. I went to church every Sunday, I donated every cent of
my earnings to charity, and I helped other people find joy in the Christmas season.
As for the man, I never saw him again. But I know who he was. Jesus had helped me find joy, he had
helped me see what Christmas was really about, it was about him.
Whoah that was amazing!! I love the story line, its so great!!!!
ReplyDeleteThx Beth! xx
DeleteWow, Mudga, this is incredible!!! Great job!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
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